ok, ill help, first of all, stop jocking trends so hard, be yourself. Don't say you've always been doing that too, everyone whos using Vs and $s fronts like they been on it since 05 but nobody heard of them before asap joey or sgp. 2nd, chill with the voice distortion, nobody wants to hear a full song of it. Have some confidence too, hip-hop isn't really a thing where people give you tips and a helping hand to learn how to rap, you gotta come at it like you really wanna be doin it, you gotta be able to spit off your dome and shit. If you only started rapping a few months ago, it will probably take you a few years to get to a point where your rhymes are worth listening to, im just being honest.